Wednesday, March 23, 2011

Tsunami Writing

We have been learning to add 'juicy words' into our writing.  Juicy words are words like adjectives and strong verbs.  We also did some art work with the koru to represent the tsunami that has hit Japan.  Click on the vocaroo to listen to us read our powerful writing.

Mia's Writing



Tyler's Writing




Grace's Writing






Emma's Writing


Posted by Unknown at 2:14 PM

9 comments:

  1. MILLIEMarch 24, 2011 at 11:50 PM

    I like your writing Emma and Grace and tyler and mia.
    it was so interesting andcool to see you Guys up on
    the blog. I realy like your righting because it pants a pitcher in my head what it would realy look like. MILLIE

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  2. ZacMarch 28, 2011 at 10:55 PM

    Awesome work guys. I really like the tsunami art. The tsunami really looked like its moving.

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  3. NinaMarch 29, 2011 at 9:24 PM

    i love your writing and your art

    Nina

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  4. Debbie SinclairMarch 30, 2011 at 3:01 AM

    I loved your bright bold koru art work, and listening to your writing about the Tsunami. Thank you for sharing your work on the blog with us :o) Keep up the great work room 20!!

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  5. MillieMarch 30, 2011 at 10:45 PM

    I realy like those
    thay have heaps of jusie
    words.
    thay are very coooooooooooool
    Millie

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  6. Ralph WinmillApril 1, 2011 at 3:32 PM

    Wow! I love this work you guys! Well done
    Tyler's dad!
    :)

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  7. UnknownApril 4, 2011 at 11:14 PM

    You are all amazing artists and writers! This blog is a great way to see what you have all been busy doing in class. Keep up the fantastic work everybody=) Pam...Emmas Mum

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  8. ethan mApril 7, 2011 at 12:25 AM

    wow! i like your writing tyler
    its cool
    Ethan m

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  9. Lawrie and CarolApril 14, 2011 at 6:38 PM

    I loved the use of your juicy words and the excellent art work. Well done Mia,Tyler, Grace and Emma. Cassie and Poppa

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