We have been learning how to persuade in writing. We wrote letters to Fonterra telling them what we thought of their new 'Milk in Schools' - check out Seb's excellent letter. You can hear him read it out loud below. What makes this a great piece of writing?
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Seb that was an amazing piece of writing we love it
ReplyDeleteWell done Seb. Your piece of writing is very interesting. I wonder if Fonterra will reply to your letter?
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