I like how you said i could feel the cold icy chill moving through the house because it painted a picture in my head of wind moving through the house 8.]
wow that story is stuipendis I love the dancing trees because it seemed to me like that because when people toled me about it it realy seemed like that the trees were dancing.
Well done Makayla! I liked the part when you said the children were tumbling.:) Ariane.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have used lots of adjectives and I like the sentances, it felt like cold icey tentacles pushing me around.
ReplyDeleteI like how you said i could feel the cold icy chill moving through the house because it painted a picture in my head of wind moving through the house 8.]
ReplyDeletewell done Makayla!!!
ReplyDeleteI liked the part when you said the children were tumbling
Thats Great Makayla!
ReplyDeleteI liked how you said that the branches were dancing because they did look like that!
Awesome Makayla - love it Mum & Dad
ReplyDeletewow that story is stuipendis
ReplyDeleteI love the dancing trees because
it seemed to me like that because
when people toled me about it
it realy seemed like that the trees were
dancing.