Wednesday, May 22, 2013

Writing

In Writing we are learning to RETELL.  We have begun by reading familiar stories and retellng them.  Here is Bella's introduction to Maui and the Sun.  What do you think she has done well?

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Posted by Unknown at 4:26 PM

6 comments:

  1. UnknownMay 22, 2013 at 4:29 PM

    Wow Bella, what a great introduction. I love the language you are using such as 'capture'.

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  2. AnonymousMay 22, 2013 at 5:12 PM

    Bella you read this story very well. It's a good introduction.
    Caitlyn

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  3. AnonymousMay 22, 2013 at 10:21 PM

    Great story Bella!
    Anna

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  4. AnonymousMay 23, 2013 at 12:27 AM

    nice reading bella you were amazing

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  5. ZoeyMay 27, 2013 at 10:41 PM

    Great reding Bella.

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  6. SaraJune 26, 2013 at 8:37 PM

    Good Job, Bella!!!

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