Wednesday, May 22, 2013

Writing

In Writing we are learning to RETELL. We have begun by reading familiar stories and retellng them. Here is Caitlyn's introduction to Maui and the Sun. What do you think she has done well?
MOV01833 from Kristin Mason on Vimeo.

5 comments:

  1. Caitlyn I realy liked how you were reading out the story Bavneet

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  2. Caitlyn I really like how you used words like quikly Bavneet

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  3. your really awesome caitlyn reading it your amazing

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  4. Great gob. I gist think you need a title. Zoey

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  5. YOUR THE BEST WRITER I'VE EVER SEEN.

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